Monday, 9 October 2017

Chocolate- descriptive poetry

After learning how chocolate was made, we wrote some descriptive poems about chocolate.
Our poems followed a pattern- noun (title),  3 adjectives, 3 verbs, 1 simile, 1 metaphor and 1 example of personification, noun.
Here are our completed poems.

Chocolate

Delicious, delectable, luxurious
Devouring, indulging, w anting
It is a feel good video game  in my mouth.
It is a smooth boulder filled with joy and happiness.
It wraps its creamy arms around my tongue.

By Raaj

 Chocolate

Creamy, delectable, indulgent
Melting, oozing, relaxing
It melts in my mouth like ice in the sun.
It is blades of grass tickling my taste buds.
It races around my body trying to make me silly.

by Caroline
Chocolate

Chunky, rich, smooth
Melting, oozing, breaking
It melts in the sun and creates a puddle.
    It is a brown bear jumping on my tongue.
It wraps its chunky arms around me.
Chocolate

by Sauwarna

 Chocolate

Chunky, creamy, silky
Oozing, melting, touching
It melts in the sun like a snowman.
It is a trip to an exotic country.
It hugs me with its brown fingers.
Chocolate

By Christina
 Chocolate

Silky, creamy, moreish
Indulging, devouring,
dripping
      It melts like a candle stick.               
It is a kangaroo jumping on my tongue.
It wraps its chocolatey arms around my mouth.
Chocolate

By Dhruvi
 Chocolate

Chunky, silky, delectable
Devouring, fading, oozing
It dribbles off my cake like a slothful waterfall.
It is medicine that makes you feel happy when you are sad.
It wraps its creamy arms around my mouth.
Chocolate

by Vrushti
 Chocolate

Bitter, creamy, chunky
Oozing, devouring, indulging
It drips from my fingers like rain pouring from the sky.
It is a milky medicine to help you when your feeling blue.
It smears its chunky arms around my mouth giving me a warm comforting hug.
Chocolate

by Georgia
 Chocolate

Creamy, smooth, delicious
Oozing, dripping, devouring
It melts like ice.
It is a treat when you feel sad.
It wraps it chunky arms around me.
Chocolate

By Grayson
Chocolate

Indulgent, moreish, bitter
Oozing, nibbling, spreading
It flows down like lava from a volcano.
It is a medicine that makes you happy when you’re sad.
It spreads its arms around my mouth with a bulky hug for me.
Chocolate

by Isaac
Chocolate

silky, adhesive, smooth,
indulging, devouring, oozing
It melts in the sun like a dripping candle stick.
It is a trip to an exotic country.
It hugs me with its chocolatey fingers.
Chocolate

by Neelansh
 Chocolate

Delectable, silky, moreish
Devouring, oozing, melting
It melts like a burning candle
It is a unique medicine
It spreads its fingers around my mouth.
Chocolate

by Advika




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